《The Admirable》SectionⅥ PPT
第一部分內(nèi)容：概要
本單元的寫作項目屬于新課標(biāo)中記敘文體類別中的概要。概要是對一篇文章的主題思想的簡單陳述，它用最簡潔的語言概括了原文的主題，使讀者對一篇文章有一個簡要概括的了解。概要主要包括總結(jié)原文的主要觀點、主要支撐細(xì)節(jié)、總體性評價。
Ⅰ.Pre-writing
(Ⅰ)Learn to write after the model
On 7 December, 2015, Tu Youyou was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery of artemisinin, a life-saving drug for malaria.
Tu Youyou majored in medicine in university and later studied Chinese medicine with experts in the field.
In 1969, Tu Youyou was given the mission to set up a team to find a cure for malaria.When worldwide scientists failed to find a cure using modern chemicals, Tu Youyou turned to Chinese herbs for help.Despite their limited resources and hundreds of failed experiments, they found a possible chemical.In order to test the medicine, Tu Youyou and her team tested the medicine on their own bodies.They finally discovered the most effective drug to cure the disease.
Although Tu Youyou has won the Nobel Prize and become well-known, she is uninterested in fame and prefers to continue her research.
(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases
①________________ n．發(fā)現(xiàn)
②________________ n. 概要；摘要
③________________ n. 隊；組
④________________ adj. 吸引人的
⑤________________ n. 進(jìn)步
⑥________________ n. 研究
⑦_(dá)_______________ adj. 好相處的
⑧________________ 主修
⑨________________ 畢業(yè)于
⑩________________ 對……有天賦
⑪________________ 努力做
⑫________________ 更喜歡， 寧愿
⑬__________________ 給某人樹立一個好榜樣
⑭________________ 被認(rèn)為/看作是……
⑮________________ 作為……而被銘記
Ⅱ.While-writing
Write a summary of the text “ The Superhero Behind Superman ”．
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加連接詞，以使行文連貫。
Step 1 List the outline of the passage.
1．首段：________________________________________________________
2．中間段：______________________________________________________
3．尾段：________________________________________________________
Step 2 List the words，phrases and sentences.
1．Words and phrases
①________________ n．貢獻(xiàn)
②________________ n. 尊敬
③________________ adj. 著名的
④________________ n. 成就；成績
⑤________________ 出生于
⑥________________ 被認(rèn)為是
⑦_(dá)________________________ 取得顯著進(jìn)步
⑧________________ 獻(xiàn)身于
⑨________________ 高度評價
⑩________________ 參加選拔
2．Sentences
①雖然他再也不能走路了，但里夫以尊嚴(yán)和勇氣開始了他的新生活。(讓步狀語從句)
②里夫解釋說，盡管他可能激勵了數(shù)百萬人，“我所做的是基于我們內(nèi)心的力量……你不需要成為‘超人’才能做到這一點。” (賓語從句；主語從句)
Step 3 Draft the article by using the following words.
and, from then on, unfortunately, although，shortly after, but
Christopher Reeve not only played a superhero in many of the Superman films, but he was also a superhero to many in real life.
Reeve acted in his first school play at the age of eight.As an actor, he tried out for, and starred in four Superman films from 1978 to 1987.From then on, he became a world-famous actor.
Unfortunately, a terrible thing happened in 1995.Reeve was thrown from a horse and broke his neck.At first, doctors did not expect him to live.However, “Superman” didn’t give up.Although he could never walk again, Reeve began his new life with dignity and courage.Shortly after his accident, Reeve returned to filmmaking.Over the next few years, he devoted himself to helping those in need.
Christopher Reeve died on 10 October, 2004.But he will always be regarded as a superhero—in more ways than one.
Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishing the passage
Exchange your passage with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.
□1.Is the format of the summary appropriate?
□2.Are there any spelling mistakes?
□3.Are there any grammatical mistakes like the tenses(時態(tài))?
□4.Does the summary include all the main contents?
□5.Is written English correctly used?
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The Admirable PPT，第二部分內(nèi)容：亮點表達(dá)
精彩開頭語
Yao Ming is a great basketball player in China or even in the world.
姚明是中國乃至世界上偉大的籃球運動員。
Martin Luther King is now regarded as one of the heroes of the 20th century.
馬丁·路德·金現(xiàn)在被認(rèn)為是20世紀(jì)的英雄之一。
Einstein, who discovered the“Relativity Theory”， is well known in the world.
愛因斯坦發(fā)現(xiàn)了“相對論”是眾所周知的。
Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers that the world has ever known.
霍華德·卡特是世界上最著名的探險家之一。
Shakespeare, who was a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.
莎士比亞出身貧寒，幾乎沒有受過什么教育，他寫的戲劇和詩歌在全世界都有人讀。
Tomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor.
托馬斯·愛迪生生于美國，是一位偉大的科學(xué)家和發(fā)明家。
精華結(jié)尾語
Sb still live in one’s heart. 某人仍然活在……心里。
Sb set a good example to...某人為……樹立了好榜樣。
Sb be respected by...某人受到……的尊重。
Sb be honored as...某人被尊為……
Sb be regarded/accepted as...某人被認(rèn)為/接受為……
Sb become a world champion at...某人在……成為世界冠軍。
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The Admirable PPT，第三部分內(nèi)容：寫作技巧
1．文體要求
概要應(yīng)該只有原文的三分之一或四分之一長；概要應(yīng)全部用自己的話完成，不要引用原文的句子；概要必須全面、清晰地表明原文所載的信息，以便你的讀者不需翻閱原文就可以完全掌握材料的原意。
2．行文要求
刪除細(xì)節(jié)，只保留主要觀點；把長段的描述變成復(fù)合句；避免重復(fù)：在原文中，為了強(qiáng)調(diào)某個主題，可能會重復(fù)論證說明。但是這在概要中應(yīng)該刪除那些突出強(qiáng)調(diào)的重述句；文章中的第一人稱說的話通常在概要中轉(zhuǎn)換成第三人稱。
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