《Friends forever》Section ⅣPPT教學(xué)課件
第一部分內(nèi)容:佳作背誦
題目要求:假設(shè)你是李華,你們班的英語老師要求每個(gè)同學(xué)在課堂上分享自己交友的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。請你根據(jù)所給提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
1.你是如何看待友誼的;
2.你是怎么選擇朋友的;
3.你是如何維持與朋友之間的友誼的。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
[背誦范文]
As the saying goes,“Friendship is like sunshine, it keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun.
I like to choose people who are kind, honest and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trust me. I always care about what has happened to them, so I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and playing. I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to maintain friendships.
[高分亮點(diǎn)]
1.本文要點(diǎn)齊全,條理清晰,層次分明。首段介紹友誼的重要性,接著介紹如何交友,怎樣與朋友相處,最后介紹如何保持友誼。
2.在遣詞造句方面,高級詞匯和句式的使用使文章增色不少。例如hang out, have fun, share ... with, care about, 省略that的賓語從句(I think it is ...), it作形式主語(it is important for us to make ...), so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句(so that we can ...), whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句,現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語等,使文章的語言表達(dá)形式靈活多變。
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Friends forever PPT,第二部分內(nèi)容:技法指導(dǎo)
[通技法——學(xué)寫作規(guī)范]
本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一則故事的結(jié)尾,屬于讀后續(xù)寫的范疇。讀后續(xù)寫,就是先閱讀所給閱讀材料,然后寫出下文。經(jīng)閱讀上文獲取信息,信息經(jīng)過大腦思維處理后,整理出時(shí)空、人物、事件的邏輯關(guān)聯(lián)性;在此基礎(chǔ)上,進(jìn)行發(fā)散思維,發(fā)揮足夠的想象力,構(gòu)思出合理的情節(jié);再謀篇布局,遣詞造句,使上下行文連貫,成為有機(jī)的整體。其所提供的語言材料的體裁以記敘文和夾敘夾議文為主。文章題材多樣,但多為情節(jié)豐富的小故事,趣味性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)。該試題具有一定的開放性,要求考生詳細(xì)且生動地展現(xiàn)情景、態(tài)度和情感。
1.續(xù)寫策略
(1)讀后續(xù)寫不是隨心所欲地寫,而是要在所給段落開頭語和短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語的幫助下完成續(xù)寫部分。其中,段落開頭語與傳統(tǒng)寫作中的開頭語類似,在某種程度上引導(dǎo)你的思路向哪方面發(fā)展,所續(xù)寫部分不能脫離各自的段落開頭語另起爐灶,要在其基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展發(fā)揮!犊荚囌f明》還規(guī)定至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語,這些關(guān)鍵詞語類似于傳統(tǒng)寫作中的要點(diǎn)提示。
(2)續(xù)寫所給語言材料多是記敘文之故事類文章,情節(jié)曲折跌宕,線索性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)?忌プ」适碌臄⑹戮索,依據(jù)原文的寫作思路續(xù)寫文章,并適當(dāng)發(fā)散思維。
(3)讀后續(xù)寫要求讀寫并重,需要考生對給定材料精確理解,這樣所續(xù)寫部分才不至于偏離主題。
(4)續(xù)寫部分的思路和內(nèi)容并不一定是唯一的,考生可以根據(jù)自己對上文材料的理解,對文章的結(jié)尾做出不同的詮釋。
2.續(xù)寫步驟
(1)精讀短文,確定短文線索。通過精讀短文,找到該篇短文的寫作線索,如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等,這樣有利于考生“順藤摸瓜(結(jié)尾)”。
(2)仔細(xì)審讀,明確續(xù)寫要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有對所續(xù)寫短文的具體要求,仔細(xì)審讀這些要求,考生就可以做到“心中有數(shù)”。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩續(xù)寫思路。根據(jù)短文后面的要求,再次快速回讀短文,抓住短文的思路,結(jié)合續(xù)寫段段首的開頭語,最終確定續(xù)寫段落的思路,同時(shí)結(jié)合短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語,確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。
(4)擬寫草稿,修改錯詞病句。擬寫時(shí),注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性,語言的豐富性,并通過正確使用句與句之間的連接詞,使上下文連貫。
(5)標(biāo)出續(xù)寫部分中使用到的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語。這一點(diǎn)可以幫助考生自己檢查關(guān)鍵詞語的使用情況并根據(jù)情況做出修改。最后在謄寫文字時(shí),務(wù)必做到字跡工整、清晰。
[即時(shí)練——靚句帶你飛]
(2018•紹興二模)閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。
My grandson, Daniel,_and I have always been very close. When Daniel's father remarried after a divorce, Daniel, who was eleven, and his little sister, Kristie, came to live with us. My_husband and I were more than happy to have so nice kids in the house again.
It is my grandson, Daniel's life's dream to play football. Daniel was cocaptain and star defensive tackle (防守阻截隊(duì)員) of his high school team; he expected to apply for a football scholarship and was looking forward to playing college football. He just loved the sport.
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